tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6930350449276012493.post6019094296654062328..comments2023-04-01T03:57:19.231-07:00Comments on Elizabeth Pereyra's Ap Lit Comp Blog: AP Practice EssayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13320280027664189867noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6930350449276012493.post-31512365609737622912013-04-29T20:59:01.845-07:002013-04-29T20:59:01.845-07:00I think you demonstrated a great understanding of ...I think you demonstrated a great understanding of the story. Could add more insight into the authors ideas in why he wrote the character that way but good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14863123427734587419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6930350449276012493.post-86201656875689530462013-04-29T20:13:03.702-07:002013-04-29T20:13:03.702-07:00Again a very high level of diction! This is a rea...Again a very high level of diction! This is a really good start with how short of time we were given in class way to go!Rylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386645435334489722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6930350449276012493.post-82408268961767645622013-04-29T19:42:03.166-07:002013-04-29T19:42:03.166-07:00I think you have some really good ideas But maybe ...I think you have some really good ideas But maybe you could add some examples of literature techniques.. Overall I think it's a good start off an essay especially for one that was done in class!<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10284797004736310677noreply@blogger.com